Monday, March 17, 2014
I KNOW THE TRUE SO DON'T BOTHER ME WITH FACTS
Everybody have their own believes and their own facts without thinking or knowing if is true or false. According to Jeffrey Kluger the adapter of ' I Know the Truth, so Don't bother me with facts," Kelly Garrett and Erik Nisbet did a new study and their conclusion was that its easy to manipulate peoples belief systems with insinuating pictures or inflammatory quotes. I agree because most of the people believe in things by rumors or facts, which I understand because they could be a lot of things that they learn or know by facts and rumors but they are not interested enough to find the true.
In my experience one belief that I have is in my religion I am catholic and since I was little my mother used to tell me that every time that I want to to thank god or ask for something I was supposed to do it in front of a frame with a picture of god .Now that I understand more of religion and I speak with people from other religions, it is a strong belief that if we pray in front of the image god is going to help us. People from other religions say that when catholic people do that is because they are believing or putting their hope on the image not on god. Which I agree but my family said that their fine and they have everything they want because they pray that way. Which I don't know what to think, but because all catholic people say it, they make people believe is true. Which I don't agree with them because I pray in any place and I believe that God listens to me.
In conclusion people are easily distracted by rumors and facts with out knowing if they are true or false. if people have their own believes is very hard to make them change their way of thinking .
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ReplyDelete1. Critical response to the text and writing task: 2
ReplyDelete-It was harsh to understand. I was confused all the time. At first the idea was kind of straight but then it became blurry. I don't think the author understood the main idea.
2. Development of the writer's ideas: 1
-The reason aren't logical. At first they refer to the topic but then become really hard to understand and somehow go one km away from the main idea. It's just my opinion thought
3. Structure of the response: 3
The essay HAS a beggining, middle and end. However, the author repeats herself sometimes an idea that has nothing to be with the main topic and, suddenly, return to the main idea what, actually, was a little distracting.
4. Sentence structure and word choice: 1
-Rarely puntuated.
5.Grammar, usage, and mechanics:2
The essay don't have grammar issues but is not easy to read because it has no puntuation.
I think the author should read the paper again very quick because the main idea is about rumors and she have a point about the rumors that people spread about catholicism but she didn't develope this idea well. The author don't show an example of her own live about the wrong ideas people have about what she believe in. This essay could be REALLY good because religion is a hot topic. However the essay wasn't detailed and,(And excuse the comment.) I think the author did it in rush not caring at all about anything. That is the idea the essay give to me.